英语剧本帮助(修改)快!
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英语剧本帮助(修改)快!
罗:Please tell us a story.
张:ok ,I tell everyone a story ,I have a friend .his name is Henry Day but everyone calls him Happy.Happy travels widely.He opens a pet shop and begins selling African Ghost Fish.
王:This is African Ghost Fish,these are the world’s only invisible fish,and they need no food.Once a year,the female Ghost Fish lays eggs.Then,while everything is quiet,she becomes visible.But,in no time,she’s gone again.You will be very fortunate to see her,because she’s the most beautiful creature alive.
张:After Happy say for the story about African Ghost Fish.Happy can sell out all the fish.Then,he go to a new place to sell the fish.He has rarely received a complaint .Many people take pleasure in looking the fish .
林:Hello,I want to buy some African Ghost Fish.I want take two,thank you!Good bye!(一系列动作…)罗:Can you tell us some more about him?
张:Ok,but before I tell you another story I want a nap.why not go to watch the fish Remember to sit quietly!
罗:let’s go~
帮忙看看有没有英文写错了,有没有时态用的不对的.
罗:Please tell us a story.
张:ok ,I tell everyone a story ,I have a friend .his name is Henry Day but everyone calls him Happy.Happy travels widely.He opens a pet shop and begins selling African Ghost Fish.
王:This is African Ghost Fish,these are the world’s only invisible fish,and they need no food.Once a year,the female Ghost Fish lays eggs.Then,while everything is quiet,she becomes visible.But,in no time,she’s gone again.You will be very fortunate to see her,because she’s the most beautiful creature alive.
张:After Happy say for the story about African Ghost Fish.Happy can sell out all the fish.Then,he go to a new place to sell the fish.He has rarely received a complaint .Many people take pleasure in looking the fish .
林:Hello,I want to buy some African Ghost Fish.I want take two,thank you!Good bye!(一系列动作…)罗:Can you tell us some more about him?
张:Ok,but before I tell you another story I want a nap.why not go to watch the fish Remember to sit quietly!
罗:let’s go~
帮忙看看有没有英文写错了,有没有时态用的不对的.
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everyone可以改成you guys.he open a pet shop 可以改成he has a pet shop they need no food.Once a year,可以改成 you mostly don't need to feed them,just only once a year.Remember to sit quietly!可以改成 sit back