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We need forgive
A famous man,called Immanuel Kant ,have said” Don’t punish yourself by somebody else's mistakes” .Of course,we face all kind of challenges in our society and sometimes we get hurt by someone close to you,maybe there are only two choices for us,revenge is one of them,but for the truth is that whoever seeks revenge should dig two graves,revenge will lead to more conflicts and our wounds will continue to grow worse.
The best way to settle our disputes is to forgive,as it benefits for relationships and for our physical and mental health by eliminating stress.With forgiveness,we can warm each other's hearts and win friendships,and this can be sometimes even more powerful.So,in our daily life,we should always be ready to forgive others,avoiding much trouble and conflict and making life more peaceful.
We need forgive
A famous man,called Immanuel Kant ,have said” Don’t punish yourself by somebody else's mistakes” .Of course,we face all kind of challenges in our society and sometimes we get hurt by someone close to you,maybe there are only two choices for us,revenge is one of them,but for the truth is that whoever seeks revenge should dig two graves,revenge will lead to more conflicts and our wounds will continue to grow worse.
The best way to settle our disputes is to forgive,as it benefits for relationships and for our physical and mental health by eliminating stress.With forgiveness,we can warm each other's hearts and win friendships,and this can be sometimes even more powerful.So,in our daily life,we should always be ready to forgive others,avoiding much trouble and conflict and making life more peaceful.
We need 【forgiveness】
A famous man, called Immanuel Kant , 【has】 said” Don’t punish yourself by somebody else's mistakes【.”】 Of course, we face all 【kinds】 of challenges in our society and sometimes we get hurt by someone close to 【us】【.】 【There】 are only two choices【.】【Revenge】 is one of them, but the truth is that whoever seeks 【for】 revenge 【digs】 two graves【.】 【Revenge】 will lead to more conflicts and our wounds will 【get】 worse.
The 【better】 way to settle our disputes is to forgive. 【It】 benefits【both】 relationships and our physical and mental health by eliminating stress. 【?不太明白你想说什么】With forgiveness, we can warm each other's hearts and win friendships, and this can be sometimes even more powerful. 【这里解释一两句会比较好】So, in our daily life, we should 【learn】 to forgive others, avoiding much trouble and conflict and making life more peaceful.
复合句运用略不合理.. 有不少fragment,总体还可以.
A famous man, called Immanuel Kant , 【has】 said” Don’t punish yourself by somebody else's mistakes【.”】 Of course, we face all 【kinds】 of challenges in our society and sometimes we get hurt by someone close to 【us】【.】 【There】 are only two choices【.】【Revenge】 is one of them, but the truth is that whoever seeks 【for】 revenge 【digs】 two graves【.】 【Revenge】 will lead to more conflicts and our wounds will 【get】 worse.
The 【better】 way to settle our disputes is to forgive. 【It】 benefits【both】 relationships and our physical and mental health by eliminating stress. 【?不太明白你想说什么】With forgiveness, we can warm each other's hearts and win friendships, and this can be sometimes even more powerful. 【这里解释一两句会比较好】So, in our daily life, we should 【learn】 to forgive others, avoiding much trouble and conflict and making life more peaceful.
复合句运用略不合理.. 有不少fragment,总体还可以.