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改错,请找出十处错误Cell phones are popular now,and many students own

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改错,请找出十处错误
Cell phones are popular now,and many students own them.The question is that students should be allowed use them at school.Some parents are for it as they need to communicating with their children.However,someothers thought it is a bad idea ,worrying that it will disturb the usually educational environment.In my opinion,it isn't really necessary for us to have cell phones in school.Busy with studies and after-clasd activity,we donnot have much time to call others.So parents and students really need to talk to each other sometimes.I suggest schools provide more pay phones on campus to settle a problem.
改错,请找出十处错误Cell phones are popular now,and many students own
1、第一行:is that 加上whether,后文列举了家长的两种不同的意见.可见问题是“孩子们在学校是否应该被允许使用手机”.
2、第二行:be allowed 后面少了一个to .
3、第二行:are for if 后面将as改为because.
4、第二行:communicating改为communicate.
5、第三行:some others 后面的thought 改为think
6、第三行:将usually改成usual,usually是个副词,但此处应该用一个形容词usual.
7、第四行:将in school 改成at school,这是固定搭配.
8、第五行:将activity改成activities,应该要加复数.
9、第五行,将so 改成if.
10、最后一行,将a改成the,用the特指父母和孩子之间要打电话的问题.
再问: 为什么要把as 改成because?