搜搜做题作业网英语作文,帮忙检查一下给些意见,
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英语作文,帮忙检查一下给些意见,
As we can see,the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So It's
necessary for us to protect the environment from now.In other words,we have
responsibility to do something which are good for our environment.For
instance,exploiting water properly.(.)What's more,rubbish
classification is also helpful,it can make the best use of the wastes.(.)
last but not least,keeping the Low carbon lifestyle in mind is important.
In a word,"the more you pay ,the more you will gain" we will have a amazing
feture if we try our best to protect the world!
As we can see,the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So It's
necessary for us to protect the environment from now.In other words,we have
responsibility to do something which are good for our environment.For
instance,exploiting water properly.(.)What's more,rubbish
classification is also helpful,it can make the best use of the wastes.(.)
last but not least,keeping the Low carbon lifestyle in mind is important.
In a word,"the more you pay ,the more you will gain" we will have a amazing
feture if we try our best to protect the world!
As we can see,the world's population is growing rapidly day by day.(这个应该是是世界的 world's) .
So It's necessary for us to protect the environment from polluting now.(protect sth from doing ).
we have responsibility to do something which is good for our environment.(are-is)
rubbish classification is also helpful(应该改为 the classification of rubbish 这样更符合表达)
keeping the Low carbon lifestyle in mind is also important（可以加个also）
the more you pay ,the more you will gain (去掉will 因为the more……the more……是并列结构)
we will have a amazing feture if we try our best to protect the world!（future 写错了哦~应该是我这个 在world's 后加个environment）希望可以帮到你~
So It's necessary for us to protect the environment from polluting now.(protect sth from doing ).
we have responsibility to do something which is good for our environment.(are-is)
rubbish classification is also helpful(应该改为 the classification of rubbish 这样更符合表达)
keeping the Low carbon lifestyle in mind is also important（可以加个also）
the more you pay ,the more you will gain (去掉will 因为the more……the more……是并列结构)
we will have a amazing feture if we try our best to protect the world!（future 写错了哦~应该是我这个 在world's 后加个environment）希望可以帮到你~