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英语翻译I'm really worried about my little cousin,He spends too

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英语翻译
I'm really worried about my little cousin,He spends too many time sitting in the front of his computer.My aunt and uncle have to work,so they can't watch him all the time.During vacations,my cousin stayed at home playing computer games from moring till night almost every day.Because that ,he does't stop playing computer games ,I will suffer it in the future .Nowadays,computer play a very important role on our life.They make our life convenient and bring us a lot of fun.Therefore,they can also harm our health if we misuse them.
英语翻译I'm really worried about my little cousin,He spends too
I'm really worried about my little cousin,我十分担心我的小表弟
He spends too many time sitting in the front of his computer.他花了太多时间坐在电脑前(言外之意,不误正业)
1错误,many--应该是much,因为Time 不可数
My aunt and uncle have to work,so they can't watch him all the time.我的叔叔和阿姨得工作,所以他们不可以总是看着他
During vacations,my cousin stayed at home playing computer games from moring till night almost every day.假期,我的表弟整天在家玩电脑游戏,几乎每天从早到晚
错误2,stayed,应该是Stays,因为整个文章都是一般现在时间,这里做题 你可以看every day这个是一般现在时的标志.
Because that ,he does't stop playing computer games ,I will suffer it in the future .因为那样,他不可以停下来玩游戏,(意思就是上瘾了),我也将会玩它.就是和他一样拉.
错误3,Because that,这里,because 后如果接句,直接用,要是名词要加of,你可以这样该because of that,
或者,该为IF,
我怎么感觉这句话不通阿
if he cant stop playing computer games,i ll suffer it in the future.
错误4 把doesnt ---cant
Nowadays,computer play a very important role on our life.如今,电脑在我们日常生活中扮演了很重要的角色.
错误5,把computer----computers,这里告诉你的是主谓要一致
错误6,ON OUR Life---in our life.
They make our life convenient and bring us a lot of fun.他们使我们的生活变得方便,给我们带来很多乐趣
Therefore,they can also harm our health if we misuse them.然而,他们也可以损害我们的健康 如果我们过渡使用
错误7,therefore 变为 however 或者是,on the other hand
就找出7各错误,不会是考试文章把,写得这样烂,前言不搭后语的