请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?
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请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?
let me introduce me to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.
要写介绍自己的英语作文了,写好了,
请各位大虾帮我看看,检查检查!
我要的是速度和准确!
好的我可以追加的!
我觉得最后一句读起来不通顺,
let me introduce me to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.
要写介绍自己的英语作文了,写好了,
请各位大虾帮我看看,检查检查!
我要的是速度和准确!
好的我可以追加的!
我觉得最后一句读起来不通顺,
![请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?](/uploads/image/z/6743359-55-9.jpg?t=%E8%AF%B7%E5%90%84%E4%BD%8D%E5%A4%A7%E8%99%BE%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E7%9C%8B%E7%9C%8B%E4%B8%8B%E9%9D%A2%E7%9A%84%E5%8F%A5%E5%AD%90%E5%9C%A8%E8%AF%AD%E6%B3%95%E4%B8%8A%E9%9D%A2%E6%9C%89%E9%94%99%E5%90%97%3F)
第一句的第二个me建议改成myself,更好一点.
第二句很好~
第三句she thinks we should eat a lot of(lots of也行)healthy food such as apples and fish every day.
第四句也没错~
再问: 最后一句没有问题吗??
再答: 最后一句不是和第四句连着的吗。。没有啊。
再问: “最快回答”说把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面
,这样通顺一点对吗?
再答: playing和swimming是并列的,但是playing后面跟的有点多,确实放在后面逻辑更通顺。。
第二句很好~
第三句she thinks we should eat a lot of(lots of也行)healthy food such as apples and fish every day.
第四句也没错~
再问: 最后一句没有问题吗??
再答: 最后一句不是和第四句连着的吗。。没有啊。
再问: “最快回答”说把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面
,这样通顺一点对吗?
再答: playing和swimming是并列的,但是playing后面跟的有点多,确实放在后面逻辑更通顺。。