搜搜做题作业网求大神查看下面语段有没有错误
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求大神查看下面语段有没有错误
My name is Wiki Octopus.I’m a passengers on MH370.I don’t know where I am.Some time before,some people on the plane stood up and said,”The plane was hijacked by us.Put you hand on you head.We have guns.I don’t want to hurt you..”They took out the guns.We were afraid.But I think,policeman will save us.My parents called me three times,but I can’t answer the phone.I think my parents is worried about me now.I want to go back home now.I can see the sky and the sun.How beautiful they are!
老师布置的作业小演讲.
My name is Wiki Octopus.I’m a passengers on MH370.I don’t know where I am.Some time before,some people on the plane stood up and said,”The plane was hijacked by us.Put you hand on you head.We have guns.I don’t want to hurt you..”They took out the guns.We were afraid.But I think,policeman will save us.My parents called me three times,but I can’t answer the phone.I think my parents is worried about me now.I want to go back home now.I can see the sky and the sun.How beautiful they are!
老师布置的作业小演讲.
偶将改的放在（）内了.看看吧.
My name is Wiki Octopus.I’m a passengers on MH370.I don’t know where I am.Some time before（sometime before改成not long ago比较象英语口语）,some people on the plane stood up and said,”The plane was hijacked by us.（不会那么斯文吧?如果真的,应该说HIJACKING.Put you(R) hand(S) on you head.We have guns.I don’t want to hurt you (用anyone,因为面对的是很多人）..”They took out the（THEIR) guns.We were afraid.But I think(THOUGHT), policeman(POLICEMEN) will save us.My parents called me three times,but I can’t(COULDN'T) answer the phone.I think my parents is(ARE) worried about me now.I want to go back home now.I can see the sky and the sun.How beautiful they are!
My name is Wiki Octopus.I’m a passengers on MH370.I don’t know where I am.Some time before（sometime before改成not long ago比较象英语口语）,some people on the plane stood up and said,”The plane was hijacked by us.（不会那么斯文吧?如果真的,应该说HIJACKING.Put you(R) hand(S) on you head.We have guns.I don’t want to hurt you (用anyone,因为面对的是很多人）..”They took out the（THEIR) guns.We were afraid.But I think(THOUGHT), policeman(POLICEMEN) will save us.My parents called me three times,but I can’t(COULDN'T) answer the phone.I think my parents is(ARE) worried about me now.I want to go back home now.I can see the sky and the sun.How beautiful they are!