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各位高手帮我检查这个作文有没有语法性或者不流畅的地方啊!
My friend
Everyone has friends.I have fiends,too.One of my friend is great.Her name is Lily.She is a thirteen-year-old girl who can let me feel warm when I am sad.She is kind,generous and friendly.She often helps the dogs and cats which are losing their ways to home.We have the same hobby.Both of us like swimming and playing the piano.She is good at swimming.We often swim together.It is a enjoyful time to play with her.She is my good friend!
顺便看看我能得多少分?明天期末考试!
My friend
Everyone has friends.I have fiends,too.One of my friend is great.Her name is Lily.She is a thirteen-year-old girl who can let me feel warm when I am sad.She is kind,generous and friendly.She often helps the dogs and cats which are losing their ways to home.We have the same hobby.Both of us like swimming and playing the piano.She is good at swimming.We often swim together.It is a enjoyful time to play with her.She is my good friend!
顺便看看我能得多少分?明天期末考试!
再加一个which are losing their ways to home==》which lost their way home
再问： 哦，好吧，除非你确定不错！我才加
再答： 诶，home是副词啦，前头不能有to 的，are losing 时态不对喽，意思也不大合适，本来想用完成时的想着你们应该没学，所以就暂时用Lost了。。。
再问： 哦，好吧，除非你确定不错！我才加
再答： 诶，home是副词啦，前头不能有to 的，are losing 时态不对喽，意思也不大合适，本来想用完成时的想着你们应该没学，所以就暂时用Lost了。。。
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