搜搜做题作业网这几句是完整的句子吗?
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这几句是完整的句子吗?
1.After Candy despair to agree let Carlson kills the dog,Carlson bring the dog to outside and shoot the dog.
2.After Candy hears the dream from George and Lennie,Candy has a dream went with them,because he can have a farm for him to live peace.
3.After Lennie broke Curley's hand in the bunkhouse,George is scared they will fire,because Curley is boss's son.
4.After Lennie and George arrive to the bunkhouse,George did not let Lennie talk much because he would makes troubles,so it cause boos think George is bully on Lennie.
5.After Lennie saw Curley's wife came in to the bunkhouse and gave the eye to Slim,Lennie is defensively saying she is pretty,because Curley's wife fascinates Lennie.
完整不知道是不是,不过就算完整也不能要连写句子run-on sentence 老师扣分而且扣N多啊.大虾们帮帮忙 看哪里错啊.
1.After Candy despair to agree let Carlson kills the dog,Carlson bring the dog to outside and shoot the dog.
2.After Candy hears the dream from George and Lennie,Candy has a dream went with them,because he can have a farm for him to live peace.
3.After Lennie broke Curley's hand in the bunkhouse,George is scared they will fire,because Curley is boss's son.
4.After Lennie and George arrive to the bunkhouse,George did not let Lennie talk much because he would makes troubles,so it cause boos think George is bully on Lennie.
5.After Lennie saw Curley's wife came in to the bunkhouse and gave the eye to Slim,Lennie is defensively saying she is pretty,because Curley's wife fascinates Lennie.
完整不知道是不是,不过就算完整也不能要连写句子run-on sentence 老师扣分而且扣N多啊.大虾们帮帮忙 看哪里错啊.
第一,全部run-on
第二,注意时态
第三,注意词的用法,比如they will fire等
第四,逻辑不清楚
第五,综合语法错误,比如agree let C kill the dog
再问： 能帮我改改吗。。。这算小测啊、、、是全部run on啊？ 我可以加高点分。。。 我英文很烂的。。。
再答： 因为你的用词我看不懂前后的联系，但是我可以给你指出语法错误，然后你改掉run-on的错误只要把句子拆开写就可以了 语法错误：1. was despaired, agree to, kill the dog, brought the dog outside 2. heard of, 其他看不懂意思 3. was scared, would get fired, the boss's son 4. arrived the bunkhouse, make, bullied L 5. into, gave a look to S, said she was pretty, got a crush on L
再问： 兄弟 你有QQ吗。。。这对我很急啊~~~ 帮帮我啊，，我绝对给你高分~~~
再答： 694593425 我不要分数的，我分数都是给大家问题散给大家的，但是我给你改你也不听
第二,注意时态
第三,注意词的用法,比如they will fire等
第四,逻辑不清楚
第五,综合语法错误,比如agree let C kill the dog
再问： 能帮我改改吗。。。这算小测啊、、、是全部run on啊？ 我可以加高点分。。。 我英文很烂的。。。
再答： 因为你的用词我看不懂前后的联系，但是我可以给你指出语法错误，然后你改掉run-on的错误只要把句子拆开写就可以了 语法错误：1. was despaired, agree to, kill the dog, brought the dog outside 2. heard of, 其他看不懂意思 3. was scared, would get fired, the boss's son 4. arrived the bunkhouse, make, bullied L 5. into, gave a look to S, said she was pretty, got a crush on L
再问： 兄弟 你有QQ吗。。。这对我很急啊~~~ 帮帮我啊，，我绝对给你高分~~~
再答： 694593425 我不要分数的，我分数都是给大家问题散给大家的，但是我给你改你也不听