you have managed to accumulate some money as the years have

you have managed to accumulate some money as the years have passed ,how will you invest it?
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Investing money is a difficult question.There are many ways to invest money and each person has their own best way to invest it.I have planned the ways to invest money and here is how I invest my money.
First of all,I will save 30% of my money into bank.This amount of money is for future use and is needed to be stored safe.Second,I will invest 50% of my money into stock market.It is best to start to invest in stocks when some one is young because every person needs time to study how the stock market works and develop skills to invest in it.The reason I put 50% of my money into stocks rather than bonds is because I am still young.Even if the stock I buy becomes less valuable in the period,I will have time to wait for its value to come back up.And finally,I will invest my 20% of money into bonds.This part of money is for investing,but safe investing.I buy bonds and get higher returns than storing the money in bank.And if I have some important things to buy and need money,I would still have the 30% amount of money in bank to withdraw.Here is how I would invest my money.
This is how I think I would invest my money.If you think it is a good way of investing,you may follow me and try what's the best percent of dividing money into each field for yourself.I always think that there are different best ways for each one to invest their money because each person has different time arrangement and enery level to take care of the money.And I believe for older people,it is better for them to choose easier ways to invest their money because it takes less energy to do.
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