帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!
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帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!
My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are very kind and funny.We can learn a lot of information.And I have many good friends at school.We only have six lessons at school from Monday to Friday.Then I hope the lunch is delicious. And Every day we can have more happy hour,have less homework.This is my dream shool day,but I know it can’t come true forever.
My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are very kind and funny.We can learn a lot of information.And I have many good friends at school.We only have six lessons at school from Monday to Friday.Then I hope the lunch is delicious. And Every day we can have more happy hour,have less homework.This is my dream shool day,but I know it can’t come true forever.
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我的名字叫杰克逊,我是一个14岁中国男孩.我是一个中学生.我的梦想是校园生活是非常好的.第一,学校是大和漂亮的 和 是非常大方和幽默的.翻译:我们学习一点信息.和我在学校有很多好同学.我们从星期一到星期五只有6节课在学校.然后我希望午餐是非常美味的.和每天我有很多欢乐时光,很少的作业.在是我梦想的校园生活,但是我知道它永远不能实现.
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我想说这个短文有很多语病,第一你用了“first”后面应该有“second”,or“ third”之类成为排比.然后“and”不能用在句子开头哦!“I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.”可以写成“I’m a fourteen-year-old Chinese boy,fourteen years old.”.“information”是不可以learn的!学习的是“knowledge”.“chinese”的“c”要大写哦!“lessons”是讲“第几课,或者什么课”应该用“periods”
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我想说这个短文有很多语病,第一你用了“first”后面应该有“second”,or“ third”之类成为排比.然后“and”不能用在句子开头哦!“I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.”可以写成“I’m a fourteen-year-old Chinese boy,fourteen years old.”.“information”是不可以learn的!学习的是“knowledge”.“chinese”的“c”要大写哦!“lessons”是讲“第几课,或者什么课”应该用“periods”