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假如你是李英,在即将毕业之际,你的英语老师Mr.Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信作纪念,信的内容包括下列三方面内容:1.你对Mr.Smith的整体印象(kind,warm-hearted,helpful,hardworking...) 2.简述一次经历或一件事(help,give up,keep...) 3.你的感受或愿望(thankful,lucky,proud...) (信的开头和结尾已给出,起字数不计入短文内,括号里的英文提示供选用) Dear Mr Smith, How are you?It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon.At the momeng I really want to say"Thank you very much."In my opinion,you are a kind and warm-hearted teacher.You always teach your students carefully.And there is a thing that makes me unforgetful.Do you want to know about it?I'll tell you.Last year,I failed my English exam that it was too important for me.I was so sad that I didn't want to learn it.But then,you asked me to your office.You smiled and encouraged me:"Don't give up!Believe yourself!!"I wad moved and I would study harder.After a short time,I got a big progress next exam.I was too happy.I won't forget you forever.At last,thank you so much.I'm proud that you are my English teacher! Best wishes to you! Yours Li Ying
老师请您帮我修改一下作文.谢谢.
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Dear Mr. Smith,
How are you?It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon.At the moment I really want to say"Thank you very much." In my heart you are a kind and warm-hearted teacher. You always teach your students carefully. And there is an unforgettable thing that makes me feel encouraged .Do you want to know about it?I'll tell you.Last year,I failed in an important English exam .I was so sad that I didn't want to learn English again .But then,you asked me to come to your office .You smiled and encouraged me:" Don't give up! Believe yourself !"I was moved and I would study harder from then on.Later on I made great progress in the next exam.I was too happy.I won't forget you forever.At last,thank you so much.I'm proud that you are my English teacher!
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Ying
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