搜搜做题作业网老师指导一下这篇作文，尤其是范文啊
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老师指导一下这篇作文，尤其是范文啊
解题思路： 根据提示可知，这是一篇邮件类作文邮件类作文和写信的格式类似，电子邮件一般由以下四部分组成：收件人，正文，结束语，落款其中收件人要注意使用敬称，正文的第一段要开门见山地表明自己的意图及简单的自我介绍第二段详细描述写作意图最后一段一般用一到两句话结束，表示感谢最后落款的时候注意格式
解题过程：
Dear Sir /Madam ,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, having finished the National College Examination. I am planning to apply for the Education Department in the Cambridge University . I was born here seventeen years ago.
I am a senior middle school student in Hangzhou No.1 Middle School and will graduate in June this year. My parents run a small travel agency here. I also work there during my summer vacation. During my first year in high school,our family moved into a new
neighbourhood. I liked my new school, and made a lot of friends there. I became interested in music and also joined thegymnastics team of our school.
At the same time , I’m curious to know about the English requirements for the applicant. I also want to know the starting time and finishing time of submitting the applications .
Thank you in advance! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解题过程：
Dear Sir /Madam ,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, having finished the National College Examination. I am planning to apply for the Education Department in the Cambridge University . I was born here seventeen years ago.
I am a senior middle school student in Hangzhou No.1 Middle School and will graduate in June this year. My parents run a small travel agency here. I also work there during my summer vacation. During my first year in high school,our family moved into a new
neighbourhood. I liked my new school, and made a lot of friends there. I became interested in music and also joined thegymnastics team of our school.
At the same time , I’m curious to know about the English requirements for the applicant. I also want to know the starting time and finishing time of submitting the applications .
Thank you in advance! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua