求助英语大神!However, I give up this dream because a kind teacher

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求助英语大神!
However,
I give up this dream because a kind teacher when I was a middle school
student.
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He
gives me some encourage when I was in trouble at that time.
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However,I gave up this dream because of a kind teacher in my high school time.
1.时态不一致..前give後was
2.because==>because of 因为後面跟的是名词
3.断句问题.because of.when..
这样的句子组合,不分句的话是有问题的...所以在下直接改了
He gave me encouragements when I was in trouble at that time.
1.时态不一致..前give後was
2.encourage=>encouragement..形容词=>名词
都是语法修正,内容就不加评论/修改了

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