高中英语翻译, 请指导.

高中英语翻译, 请指导.
可能在你们看来,我是一个很不和善,很高傲的人.是因为我给人的第一印象就很凶,而且,我眨眼睛的时候很像翻白眼.这是我的烦恼.而其实,熟悉我的人知道我对人友好..可能某某人听着我说的话,正在心里说我的不是,我也不知道该如何待你.我也很想知道我做错什么..有个说法说我总是不承认错误,其实每次我总是说不出一句"sorry".而过后我总是很后悔.是我口才不好,出口就得罪人..现在,我不知道如何表达自己的内心,学着坚强吧! 在这里,我想谢谢某个人,她就是XXX.你一直鼓励我,一直站在我身边,理解我.非常感谢你.
上面是翻译的内容,是我用于free talk演讲的,我想你们写一下,让我看我有没有哪些错了.谢谢指导.
好的我可以加分.
我急需它来做课件,麻烦各位哥哥姐姐快点噢~

Maybe in your view, I am an unkind and proud man, because the first impression I give to others is rather fierce. Moreover, when I blink my eyes, it seems that I am showing the whites of my eyes. It is my annoyance. However, people who are familiar with me all know that I am friendly man..Maybe someone may blame me in his or her mind when he or she is listening to me. I really do not know how to treat you and I also want to know what I have misdid..There is a statement that I never admit my false. However, the fact is that it is difficult for me to say "sorry" out,even though I say it in my heart numerious times. And after that ,I regreted much. My eloquence is poor, and it is easy for me to offend others when I am speaking...Now, I do not know how to express my deep feeling. The thing I only can do is learning that how to become adamancy. And, I want to thank XXX. She always stands in my side, understands me and encourages me. XXX, thank you.
楼主你好：我基本上是直译的,只是有一两句可能是意义的,因为直译的话,别人可能听不懂你在说什么.同时,为了便于听者的理解,我加了一句话even though I say it in my heart numerious times.最后一句话：,她就是XXX.你一直鼓励我,一直站在我身边,理解我.此话语序不正确,应是站在身边,理解我,鼓励我.同时用你不正确,因为你讲演的对象不是那个女孩,而是听众,因此在最后我做了一下调整.如果楼主你另有用意,自己就可以改过来.因为最后一句话比较简单