急求英语作文技术帖之前在知道上看过一个写得很好的既有开头的经典句型,还有中间的表反对,表建议等等,还有能提分的结尾句型,

急求英语作文技术帖
之前在知道上看过一个写得很好的既有开头的经典句型,还有中间的表反对,表建议等等,还有能提分的结尾句型,最后还列了几个谚语,但那篇知道找不到了,要是找不到就教教我怎样英语作文提分的短语也好,

我是学托福的准备出国的,我推荐写作文的看那些越难的文章对写作越有帮助,我以前作文也不好,但是自从开始学习托福作文的时候,一些句型,一些高级词汇,一些经典的连接词,对于英语作文提高的其实并不是短语什么的,而是其中的高级词汇还有句子的连贯性,比如说to begin with可以代替first of all .Morever可以代替secondly,for instance可以代替for example,这类词太多太多了.但如果你first second会使文章非常僵硬,虽然条理清楚,但老师未必会喜欢.写作文可能虽然刚开始比较困难,但是学完一篇之后就会豁然开朗,提高的就不止是一个档次.我建议可以看下托福的作文.
下面我给一篇托福的作文
【题目】
　　people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example,new experiences,career preparation,increased knowledge).why do you think people attend college or university?use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　【范文】 why people attend college or university?
　　there are many advantages to a college or university education.students have ample opportunity to explore a variety of interests,increase both their general and specific knowledge,prepare for a chosen career and develop independence.all of these are valuable goals to achieve,but it is my belief that most students today pursue higher education insgroupsto prepare for their future careers.
　　in the past,only the rich and privileged had the opportunity to attend a university and their goals were very different.coming from wealthy families,few of them would have to compete for a job after graduation,and most wished only to be considered well-educated.today’s students are more practical.they must be able to compete in a very competitive job market; therefore,a practical education is very important.furthermore,higher education is a big investment and so most students want to get all they can out of it.for these students,it is better to have clearly defined career and education goals rather than to try and find themselves in college.of course,all students want to increase their knowledge,but i believe that most students today want that knowledge to be relevant to their future careers.
　　the world has changed a great deal since universities were established.they are still wonderful places for acquiring broad knowledge and for personal development.however,in today’s competitive world these pursuits must be balanced with the pursuit of more specific goals.that is why i think most students view higher education as a valuable tool in career preparation.