搜搜做题作业网英语改错,奖一百分把下面的英语短文改的更地道些,Woman’s RightsIn China’s feudal soci
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英语改错,奖一百分
把下面的英语短文改的更地道些,
Woman’s Rights
In China’s feudal society,women had little social status,and were regardeds as inferior than men.After the women’s liberation movement,women are equal with men according to the law.But in fact,women still can’t enjoy equals rights with men.
At home ,wives must do all the housework.This is clearly inequitable.Husband and wife should share the work and responsibilities of a home and family.I see some husbands get angry when they find the cleaning or cooking hasn’t been done by wives.I just wonders why they don’t do it for themselves?
I think women should be spiritually and economically indepent if they want real equality with men .So they have to learn as much as men do to find a good job.One’s appearance is no longer important women.Noways,a job is given to you according to your ability rather than your appearance .So I think the best way for women to get more rights is to be well educated.
把下面的英语短文改的更地道些,
Woman’s Rights
In China’s feudal society,women had little social status,and were regardeds as inferior than men.After the women’s liberation movement,women are equal with men according to the law.But in fact,women still can’t enjoy equals rights with men.
At home ,wives must do all the housework.This is clearly inequitable.Husband and wife should share the work and responsibilities of a home and family.I see some husbands get angry when they find the cleaning or cooking hasn’t been done by wives.I just wonders why they don’t do it for themselves?
I think women should be spiritually and economically indepent if they want real equality with men .So they have to learn as much as men do to find a good job.One’s appearance is no longer important women.Noways,a job is given to you according to your ability rather than your appearance .So I think the best way for women to get more rights is to be well educated.
inferior than应该改成inferior to
equal with应该是equal to
of a home and family应该是of a family
I just wonders应该是I just wonder
don't do it for themselves应该删除for
as much as men do to 删除do
no longer important women应该在women前面加for
Noways应该是Nowadays
equal with应该是equal to
of a home and family应该是of a family
I just wonders应该是I just wonder
don't do it for themselves应该删除for
as much as men do to 删除do
no longer important women应该在women前面加for
Noways应该是Nowadays