搜搜做题作业网帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.
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帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English？
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English？
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen
楼主 请发你的信件
再问： 也不是信件啦 是我想贴在留学生园区的广告大字报。。。
再答： ENGLISH TEACHER NEEDED! Hello, overseas! Can You Speak English？ I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practice my spoken English for the TOEFL test which I'll take next year. You will get well paid. We can get together to negotiate for a fair price. Additionally, we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China. I'm looking forward to your calling. Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX My Name: Burgess Chen 小改几个单词就行.不过这个文章看起来好像不太吸引人.无意贬低楼主.
再问： 那怎样写才吸引人呢？
再答： Attention!!! Look forward to a good English Speaking student to be my teacher.Helping me with the TOFEL test next year. High salary,high paid. Besides a good friend you will have. All the magical thing you will know from me about China.Just come and let us talk. Thanks and wait for your call. 不知道这样行不。希望能帮上忙啦
再问： 也不是信件啦 是我想贴在留学生园区的广告大字报。。。
再答： ENGLISH TEACHER NEEDED! Hello, overseas! Can You Speak English？ I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practice my spoken English for the TOEFL test which I'll take next year. You will get well paid. We can get together to negotiate for a fair price. Additionally, we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China. I'm looking forward to your calling. Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX My Name: Burgess Chen 小改几个单词就行.不过这个文章看起来好像不太吸引人.无意贬低楼主.
再问： 那怎样写才吸引人呢？
再答： Attention!!! Look forward to a good English Speaking student to be my teacher.Helping me with the TOFEL test next year. High salary,high paid. Besides a good friend you will have. All the magical thing you will know from me about China.Just come and let us talk. Thanks and wait for your call. 不知道这样行不。希望能帮上忙啦