帮我纠正一下语法问题吧,修改一下文章对话,老师要查的.

帮我纠正一下语法问题吧,修改一下文章对话,老师要查的.
1: "Hello Kelly."
2: "Hi kitty. How's your summer?"
1: "Not bad. I have just learned how to swim. How about you?"
2: "It was good. I went to Guangdong with my parents and grand parents."
1: "Oh really. That's nice. I have never been to Guangdong."
2: "I was in Zhongshan. It is a nice place to be in. But the weather was hot and humid."
1: "I see. I don't like that sort of weather. I prefer staying in the North during summer."
2: "Me too."
2: By the way, your swimming lessons, how were they?
1: I can float in water and I am not afraid of water anymore.
2: That's very good to hear. I wish I could swim too.
1: Why don't you take up some swimming lessons?
2: You see, from where I live, there is no swimming pool nearby.
1: That's very true. But you can come with me to Guangdong next time.
2: That's a brilliant idea. I could learn how to swim in Guangdong.
1: My parents have a summer house and so you can stay with us.
2: That is lovely. But I will have to speak with my parents
1: Sure.
2: Oh I am so excited. I will have a chance to learn how to swim soon.
1: My swimming teacher was very good. I think you will learn well.
1: And I can't wait to hear that good news.
2: I better get going now. We will speak tomorrow.
1: OK. Bye for now. See you
2: See you then.

How about you?-What about you ?
It is a nice place to be in.-It is a nice place.
That's very good to hear.-That's very good.
take up =take part in
from where I live =不要
and so-and
My swimming teacher was=.is
I think you will learn quickly.
And =不要
I had better go now.See you tomorrow.
Bye for now=不要
再问： 不要是什么意思。。
再答： 不要就是可以不用的，去掉。。。