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I have a pen pal. His name is Jerry. He is 14 years old. He is an American boy. He is in Class3, Grade 1.There are four people in his family. They are father, mother, sister and him. His father is a doctor. His mother is a teacher. His sister studies in No.3 Middle School. He has many hobbies. He likes reading books, listening to music and playing computer games. But he doesn't like sports, especially running and jumping. 毕业感言 六年的生活如花似锦的绽放，小学的生活向我告别了，一想到就要和相处了六年的老师同学说再见了，不仅有几分伤感。 六年来一切如昙花一现到了最后也许只留下那瞬间的芳香，希望我们都不停的去追逐爱与幸福的脚步停止对过去的悲伤与哭泣的齿轮，原来一种相遇是为了分离，原来一种希望是为了绝望，原来一种心动是为了心碎。 水可以冲淡一切的一切，可永远也冲淡不了我们之间的友谊，我们之间的友谊天长地久 ，缘分未减，命运相连，仙人掌花是坚强的，希望我们都向仙人掌一样，坚强面对困难，坦然面对未来。 夕阳西下，阳光透过重重枝丫，在苔藓下，留下斑斑点点让我们回忆那纯洁的友谊.................
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I have a pen pal. His name is Jerry. He is 14 years old. He is an American boy. He is in Class3, Grade 1.There are four people in his family. They are father, mother, sister and him. His father is a doctor. His mother is a teacher. His sister studies in No.3 Middle School. He has many hobbies. He likes reading books, listening to music and playing computer games. But he doesn't like sports, especially running or jumping.
此文写得非常好，语句通顺，语法正确。语言逻辑性强。很棒的习作。
最终答案：略
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I have a pen pal. His name is Jerry. He is 14 years old. He is an American boy. He is in Class3, Grade 1.There are four people in his family. They are father, mother, sister and him. His father is a doctor. His mother is a teacher. His sister studies in No.3 Middle School. He has many hobbies. He likes reading books, listening to music and playing computer games. But he doesn't like sports, especially running or jumping.
此文写得非常好，语句通顺，语法正确。语言逻辑性强。很棒的习作。
最终答案：略