搜搜做题作业网tpo12综合写作 求评分
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tpo12综合写作 求评分
The reading material makes the point that
the girl in the painting is Austen.However,the listening material claims that
the reasons in the passage are not convincing.
First,the reading material says that the
painting was proved by Austen’s family.In contrast,the listening material
thinks that Austen had been dead many years before this painting was authorized.
Therefore,her family members could not be certain about the painting because
they had never seen her.
Second,the author believes that the girl
in the picture is Austen because the similarity between these two girls.How,
the speaker thinks that the girl may be one of Austen’s relatives because there
Austen’s family was very big and many teenagers lived in the same period as Austen.
Among these family members,may be one of them looked like Austen.Many experts
believe that the painting was one of Austen’s relatives.
Third,the speaker refutes the viewpoint
made by the author that the style of the painting reveals that it was painted
by H.The speaker says that the evidence on the back of the painting shows that
it was sold by a man who did not sell his painting until a period when Austen
was an adult.Therefore,the girl in the painting cannot be Austen because the
girl is a teenager.
The reading material makes the point that
the girl in the painting is Austen.However,the listening material claims that
the reasons in the passage are not convincing.
First,the reading material says that the
painting was proved by Austen’s family.In contrast,the listening material
thinks that Austen had been dead many years before this painting was authorized.
Therefore,her family members could not be certain about the painting because
they had never seen her.
Second,the author believes that the girl
in the picture is Austen because the similarity between these two girls.How,
the speaker thinks that the girl may be one of Austen’s relatives because there
Austen’s family was very big and many teenagers lived in the same period as Austen.
Among these family members,may be one of them looked like Austen.Many experts
believe that the painting was one of Austen’s relatives.
Third,the speaker refutes the viewpoint
made by the author that the style of the painting reveals that it was painted
by H.The speaker says that the evidence on the back of the painting shows that
it was sold by a man who did not sell his painting until a period when Austen
was an adult.Therefore,the girl in the painting cannot be Austen because the
girl is a teenager.
1,注意reading/listening material 是不能 说话的.最好吧listening material 改成的lecturer,professor,speaker.
2,Body段开头很不错,很清晰.段落中的表对比转折的词最好不要用第二遍.（however,yet,in contrary to,but.）
3,论述和对比在充分点.阅读文章现成的摆在那里就是要你用的,要paraphrase!
ex.（Second,the author believes that the girl
in the picture is Austen because the similarity between these two girls）
注意What similarity?
4,语法,偏口语化.ex.第二段（How,
the speaker thinks that the girl may be one of Aust.）
总体不错,思路清晰,做到以上几点就能保perfect了.加油.
Level ：Good(4.0 - 5.0)
Your Performance ：You responded well to the task,relating the lecture to the reading.Weaknesses,if you have any,might have to do with
slight imprecision in your summary of some of the main points and/or
use of English that is occasionally ungrammatical or unclear.
2,Body段开头很不错,很清晰.段落中的表对比转折的词最好不要用第二遍.（however,yet,in contrary to,but.）
3,论述和对比在充分点.阅读文章现成的摆在那里就是要你用的,要paraphrase!
ex.（Second,the author believes that the girl
in the picture is Austen because the similarity between these two girls）
注意What similarity?
4,语法,偏口语化.ex.第二段（How,
the speaker thinks that the girl may be one of Aust.）
总体不错,思路清晰,做到以上几点就能保perfect了.加油.
Level ：Good(4.0 - 5.0)
Your Performance ：You responded well to the task,relating the lecture to the reading.Weaknesses,if you have any,might have to do with
slight imprecision in your summary of some of the main points and/or
use of English that is occasionally ungrammatical or unclear.