我写一封信给外国人,希望各位能帮帮忙检查,
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我写一封信给外国人,希望各位能帮帮忙检查,
查语病,不通顺。
冒犯他国风俗或圣诞节礼仪常识?
Dear Santa,
Merry Christmas!
I'm happy to write to you!
I come from another country.We speak English as our second language.So my English isn't so good,please forgive me.
When I was young,I often heard the Christmas Story.And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.So every year when Christmas comes,I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed.What makes me happy is whenever I wake up,I always receive presents which I want.I think it is given by you,dear Santa!So I'm writing to thank you.I don't tell you what I want this year,I hope you can guess what!But I still hope that you can send me a little gift before Christmas when you write back to me,such as a card,a little book,etc.
This is my first time to write to a Santa.I imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!I hope hearing from you soon!I wish that in the new year,you can live happy!(Sincerely.
查语病,不通顺。
冒犯他国风俗或圣诞节礼仪常识?
Dear Santa,
Merry Christmas!
I'm happy to write to you!
I come from another country.We speak English as our second language.So my English isn't so good,please forgive me.
When I was young,I often heard the Christmas Story.And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.So every year when Christmas comes,I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed.What makes me happy is whenever I wake up,I always receive presents which I want.I think it is given by you,dear Santa!So I'm writing to thank you.I don't tell you what I want this year,I hope you can guess what!But I still hope that you can send me a little gift before Christmas when you write back to me,such as a card,a little book,etc.
This is my first time to write to a Santa.I imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!I hope hearing from you soon!I wish that in the new year,you can live happy!(Sincerely.
I'm happy to write to you!改为I'm glad to write to you!
We speak English as our second language改为People here speak English as our second language
So my English isn't so 改为To be honest my English isn't so
And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.中是flying
So every year when Christmas comes最好写every Christmas就好
I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed应是I always hang Christmas stockings beside my bed.
I don't tell you what I want this year应是I won't tell you what I want this year
imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!,中动词要加-ing
I hope hearing from you soon!应是hope to hear
you can live happy应是happily
其他的应该没什么大错误,不错哟,给外国人写信可以提高你的英语水平哟
We speak English as our second language改为People here speak English as our second language
So my English isn't so 改为To be honest my English isn't so
And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.中是flying
So every year when Christmas comes最好写every Christmas就好
I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed应是I always hang Christmas stockings beside my bed.
I don't tell you what I want this year应是I won't tell you what I want this year
imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!,中动词要加-ing
I hope hearing from you soon!应是hope to hear
you can live happy应是happily
其他的应该没什么大错误,不错哟,给外国人写信可以提高你的英语水平哟
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