搜搜做题作业网牛人帮我看看这里面有什么语法错误.
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牛人帮我看看这里面有什么语法错误.
Dear Bob:
I am writing to make an apology to you for the thing that I forgot to return back a music CD for you which you lend me last week.Yesterday I came back from Canada and I found the CD in my luggage.I am so sorry for you because you can't listening when you want to.
So,I have some ideas for you to solve the problem.The first one is that you can buy a new one and the cost I will give you.The another choice of you is that I sent it back.And I wonder if any other solutions you like,please let me know.
I am so sorry for my careless.Looking forward to your reply.
Dear Bob:
I am writing to make an apology to you for the thing that I forgot to return back a music CD for you which you lend me last week.Yesterday I came back from Canada and I found the CD in my luggage.I am so sorry for you because you can't listening when you want to.
So,I have some ideas for you to solve the problem.The first one is that you can buy a new one and the cost I will give you.The another choice of you is that I sent it back.And I wonder if any other solutions you like,please let me know.
I am so sorry for my careless.Looking forward to your reply.
eturn有还回的意思 所以不要Back了 而且CD后面既然有定语从句修饰了 前面要用定冠词the 而且定语从句貌似少了个介词 所以那句话改为I forgot to return the music CD to you which you lent to me last week 此外 我不确定music CD这种说法好不好 我觉得有点怪
lend的过去式是lent
sorry for you?我觉得是sorry to you 后面是can't listen
第二段 I will pay for you我给你付账 还有 the another choice for you 最后一句话问题最大 有两个谓语了 我建议改成 If you have any other solutions ,please let me know.
最后一段Carelessness
整体上你写得不错 手机党不方便 可能我写的有点乱
lend的过去式是lent
sorry for you?我觉得是sorry to you 后面是can't listen
第二段 I will pay for you我给你付账 还有 the another choice for you 最后一句话问题最大 有两个谓语了 我建议改成 If you have any other solutions ,please let me know.
最后一段Carelessness
整体上你写得不错 手机党不方便 可能我写的有点乱