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I’m a student of GuangMing middle school in grade three. I found an important question around me. Some students have anxiety symptoms before exams, for example: dizzy、weak、sleep bad…
So I come up with some advice. First , students should make a good plan before exams. Second , during exams students should have a good rest. Third, before go to the bed , they should take a shower and drink hot milk, so that they can sleep well. And they must relax state of mind , so they don’t be nervous . If they can do this , I think they can have big progress.
老师给出分数 谢谢
So I come up with some advice. First , students should make a good plan before exams. Second , during exams students should have a good rest. Third, before go to the bed , they should take a shower and drink hot milk, so that they can sleep well. And they must relax state of mind , so they don’t be nervous . If they can do this , I think they can have big progress.
老师给出分数 谢谢
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解题过程：
I’m a student of GuangMing middle school in grade three. I found an important question around me. Some students have anxiety symptoms before exams, for example: dizzy、weak、sleep bad…
So I come up with some advice. First , students should make a good plan before exams. Second , during exams students should have a good rest. Third, before go to the bed , they should take a shower and drink hot milk, so that they can sleep well. And they must relax state of mind , so they don’t be nervous . If they can do this , I think they can have big progress. 1、改为problem 2、用词不当，for example后面接句子。建议改为they feel dizzy，…… 3、bad sleep 4、going，因为before是介词。或者改为before they go……，把before看成连词。 5、aren’t 6、make progress是短语。 7、有语言错误。但是连接词用的比较到位。句子变换灵活。唯一缺陷是词汇积累太少，个别词不达意。给分17分。 8、 建议下次提交作文，放在“作文评改”栏目中，这样可以给自己一个积累写作素材的地方，而且老师还可以给予更细致的讲评。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I’m a student of GuangMing middle school in grade three. I found an important question around me. Some students have anxiety symptoms before exams, for example: dizzy、weak、sleep bad…
So I come up with some advice. First , students should make a good plan before exams. Second , during exams students should have a good rest. Third, before go to the bed , they should take a shower and drink hot milk, so that they can sleep well. And they must relax state of mind , so they don’t be nervous . If they can do this , I think they can have big progress. 1、改为problem 2、用词不当，for example后面接句子。建议改为they feel dizzy，…… 3、bad sleep 4、going，因为before是介词。或者改为before they go……，把before看成连词。 5、aren’t 6、make progress是短语。 7、有语言错误。但是连接词用的比较到位。句子变换灵活。唯一缺陷是词汇积累太少，个别词不达意。给分17分。 8、 建议下次提交作文，放在“作文评改”栏目中，这样可以给自己一个积累写作素材的地方，而且老师还可以给予更细致的讲评。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略