一道英语该错题Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about ou

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一道英语该错题
Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school ___
sports meet.It was holding on Oct.6,which was a ___
fine day.There were over 1,000 students and teachers ___
attend it.Wang Bin,a student from my class won the ___
100-meter race.He finish the race in 12.6 seconds ___
and broke in the school record.The sports meet ___
was really success.That was because we were ___
all trying to do my best.___
Although I was not one of the winner,I ___
was proud of that we had done.___
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
打错了,是英语改错,不是英语该错
能不能把第一行的more去掉

1.去掉something,tell sb sth即可,但从上下文可以判断是还有更多的要告诉他,所以是tell sb more about sth.
2.hold改成held,这是一个被动语法,所以要用过去分词.
3.这句是对的
4.attend改为attending,there be句型已经有了谓语,一个句子不能有两个谓语,所以要处理成分词形式.
5.finish改成finished,从整篇文章的时态看,要用过去时.
6.去掉in 破记录是 break the record
7.success改成successful ,这是做表语,前面是be动词,所以应该用形容词
8.my改成 our 从上面的we可以判断要用our复数
9.winner改成winners,从one of里边知道这是一个复数形式
10 that改成what,这是一个宾语从句,what引导词在从句中做宾语成分.

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