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高考准备作文，帮着修改指错
关于记录外国人来北京生活的点点滴滴。我英语不是很好，希望帮助指出时态和语法上的错误，帮助我修改修改，最好能增加点亮点。
To start with a lot of people waiting for you coming and organized a grand welcome meeting.
While you're here when you will have a extremely comfortable room.The room are well furnished, to make you feel at home which is actually far away from here. I believe you won't be lonely any longer.
Next we went to school by bike day by day.As the low-carbon economy is becoming the focus of the world gradually,great meaning has been attached to riding bicycles to school.
In China,I show he around the Temple of Heaven.He was shocked by the scenery here.
Then he attends class listens earnestly and answers the question positively.He has becoming friends with many friends in the study life.
We ate at the dining hall,i'm sure you'll like the delicious Chinese food as well i hold the opinion that you shouldn't miss this opportunity,otherwise you will regret.
Finally,we sent him leave,although we reluctantly,after all the world has not come to an end.
关于记录外国人来北京生活的点点滴滴。我英语不是很好，希望帮助指出时态和语法上的错误，帮助我修改修改，最好能增加点亮点。
To start with a lot of people waiting for you coming and organized a grand welcome meeting.
While you're here when you will have a extremely comfortable room.The room are well furnished, to make you feel at home which is actually far away from here. I believe you won't be lonely any longer.
Next we went to school by bike day by day.As the low-carbon economy is becoming the focus of the world gradually,great meaning has been attached to riding bicycles to school.
In China,I show he around the Temple of Heaven.He was shocked by the scenery here.
Then he attends class listens earnestly and answers the question positively.He has becoming friends with many friends in the study life.
We ate at the dining hall,i'm sure you'll like the delicious Chinese food as well i hold the opinion that you shouldn't miss this opportunity,otherwise you will regret.
Finally,we sent him leave,although we reluctantly,after all the world has not come to an end.
1.a lot of 太低等，换成a multitude of
2waiting for you coming 改成wait for you，否则这个句子就没有谓语了，organized改成organize，时态要保持一致
3 While you're here when you will have a extremely comfortable room.如果你在这里的话，你就会有一间非常舒适的房间是吧？while换成when，否则会引起歧义：while有尽管的意思，也有当……的时候的意思，后面的when去掉，a 换成an
4The room are well furnished, to make you feel at home which is actually far away from here.当中are 换成is ，这句话看不懂，可以改成The room is well furnished, so as to make you feel at home for the reason that it is actually far away from here.
5Next we went to school by bike day by day然后我们逐日骑单车去学校，说不通吧？应该换成：然后我们每天骑单车去学校，Next we go to school by bike every day
6 to riding 既然用了不定式，就用动词原形，to ride
7Then he attends class listens earnestly and answers the question positively 后面用了and 还无可厚非，可是前面没有用and 就出现两个谓语attend 以及listen了，说不通，在他们中间加一个and，或者加一个逗号
8He has becoming friends with many friends 中he 和becoming后面的friends不对应，而且这句话有中式英语的嫌疑，而且完成时用得不对，has done ，become的过去分词就是become，换成he has become a friend of my friends
9Finally,we sent him leave,although we reluctantly也非常多语法错误，首先although是不能后置的，如果要后置一定要用though，送某人应该是sent sb off ，sent him leave是很典型的中式英语，we reluctantly中we是主语，谓语呢？宾语呢？统统没有.reluctantly是一个副词就只能作为状语来用，但是主谓宾，或者主系表不完整，要状语何用？所以，改成we were reluctant。
2waiting for you coming 改成wait for you，否则这个句子就没有谓语了，organized改成organize，时态要保持一致
3 While you're here when you will have a extremely comfortable room.如果你在这里的话，你就会有一间非常舒适的房间是吧？while换成when，否则会引起歧义：while有尽管的意思，也有当……的时候的意思，后面的when去掉，a 换成an
4The room are well furnished, to make you feel at home which is actually far away from here.当中are 换成is ，这句话看不懂，可以改成The room is well furnished, so as to make you feel at home for the reason that it is actually far away from here.
5Next we went to school by bike day by day然后我们逐日骑单车去学校，说不通吧？应该换成：然后我们每天骑单车去学校，Next we go to school by bike every day
6 to riding 既然用了不定式，就用动词原形，to ride
7Then he attends class listens earnestly and answers the question positively 后面用了and 还无可厚非，可是前面没有用and 就出现两个谓语attend 以及listen了，说不通，在他们中间加一个and，或者加一个逗号
8He has becoming friends with many friends 中he 和becoming后面的friends不对应，而且这句话有中式英语的嫌疑，而且完成时用得不对，has done ，become的过去分词就是become，换成he has become a friend of my friends
9Finally,we sent him leave,although we reluctantly也非常多语法错误，首先although是不能后置的，如果要后置一定要用though，送某人应该是sent sb off ，sent him leave是很典型的中式英语，we reluctantly中we是主语，谓语呢？宾语呢？统统没有.reluctantly是一个副词就只能作为状语来用，但是主谓宾，或者主系表不完整，要状语何用？所以，改成we were reluctant。