英语翻译my friends ,every of us has our own independent goals ,w

英语翻译
my friends ,every of us has our own independent goals ,which leading less time for us to get together having fun.However,in the future,when we accumulate much wealth ,at that time ,we have such a brilliant and glorious life evironment ,and we can hold together sharing our experience of our hardworking .Therefore,let us enjoy lonely at this time and struggle to be a real man

my friends（我的朋友,其中不包括我）和every of us（我们每个人,当然包括我）,前后不等同,所以不能用逗号前后隔开,将两个不能等同的东西等同当做同位语看待,可以这么说：I have many friends.
every of us没有这个用法,你这儿想表达的意思是“我们每个人”,可以这么说：all of us have independent goals或者说everyone has his independent goal.
which leading less time for us to get together having fun,你在这儿是想用个非限定性定语从句,但要注意,定语从句是一个由完整句子充当的定语,可是你的从句却用的现在分词leading这个非谓语动词,缺乏谓语,“聚在一起玩儿”可以直接说成get together for fun,less含有比较的意味,可是句中看不出任何比较的对象,整句话可以这么说：which leads llittle time for us to get together for fun
However,in the future, when we accumulate much wealth , at that time ,we have such a brilliant and glorious life evironment ,and we can hold together sharing our experience of our hardworking .这句话很长且有点繁琐,such……that可以是句子整体性更强,hardworking是形容词,our是个形容词性物主代词,后面应该接名词hardwork,另外用将来完成时更准确一些,可以这么说：However,in the future, when we accumulate much wealth , we will have had such a brilliant and glorious life evironment that we can hold together ,sharing our experience of hardwork. .
Therefore,let us enjoy lonely at this time and struggle to be a real man.enjoy是动词,后面应该接名词loneliness,不应该是形容词lonely,“此刻,现在”是at the time,不是at this time.
整篇的意思是：我有很多朋友,我们每个人都有自己的目标,这使得我们很少能有时间聚在一起玩乐.但是,将来,当我们积累了很多的财富,那时我们已经拥有了一个富足的生活环境,可以聚在一起分享彼此辛勤工作的经验.所以,让我们此刻享受孤独,努力成为一个伟大的人.
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