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The pollution of the environment Do you know ? The environmental pollution is serious nowadays . It harms our life . Many years ago , the river is clean and there are many fishes in it .The air is fresh . But now there is not any more fish in the river . the river is dirty.It makes people be away from it .What makes it dirty? People always pour waste things into the rivers .Many factories are built in the city .It makes the air dirty .some people prefers to stay at home rather than walk on the road .Noise pollution also affects our life .It’s necessary for us to solve the problems .we should take care of the pool . Don’t throw the rubbish anywhere .We should also plant more trees to make the air fresh .let’s protect our environment.
解题思路： 语句是否通顺,语法有无错误,语言是否符合逻辑.
解题过程：
The pollution of the environment Do you know that the environmental pollution is serious nowadays?It harms our life . Many years ago , the river is clean and there are many fishes in it .The air is fresh . But now there is not any more fish in the river . The river is dirty.It makes people be away from it .What makes it dirty? People always pour waste things into the rivers .Many factories are built in the city .It makes the air dirty .some people prefer to stay at home rather than walk on the road .Noise pollution also affects our life .It’s necessary for us to solve the problems .we should take care of the pool . Don’t throw the rubbish anywhere .We should also plant more trees to make the air fresh .Let’s protect our environment. 语句通顺,内容完整,基本无语法错误.写的很有条理.继续努力吧!相信你一定会取得更大的进步.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
The pollution of the environment Do you know that the environmental pollution is serious nowadays?It harms our life . Many years ago , the river is clean and there are many fishes in it .The air is fresh . But now there is not any more fish in the river . The river is dirty.It makes people be away from it .What makes it dirty? People always pour waste things into the rivers .Many factories are built in the city .It makes the air dirty .some people prefer to stay at home rather than walk on the road .Noise pollution also affects our life .It’s necessary for us to solve the problems .we should take care of the pool . Don’t throw the rubbish anywhere .We should also plant more trees to make the air fresh .Let’s protect our environment. 语句通顺,内容完整,基本无语法错误.写的很有条理.继续努力吧!相信你一定会取得更大的进步.
最终答案：略