修改英语作文today's afternoon ,when I was on the way to the conema
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修改英语作文
today's afternoon ,when I was on the way to the conema.
I saw an old man that who looked so worried is asking for help.
I went to him and said that what could I help you
The old man said with anxiety that he lost the way to the hospital that his son works in.
I did what I could to clam him ,and then I told him that we could go there together.
He was so happy that I could help him.
At last,the old man found his son and appreiated me a lot.
But when I arrived at the cinema ,the film had already ended.I think,though I missed the film,I didn't feel disappointed.And I also think,it was worth helping others when they are in trouble.
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1楼2楼,纯属骗分,一楼的看都没看就贴了一遍,CINEMA打错了,都没看见,2楼更扯淡,把问题复制了一遍居然还说不知道,那你来回答干什么?
不用全文打,只要说哪里要修改,怎么改就好,还可以HI我,马上要用,
today's afternoon ,when I was on the way to the conema.
I saw an old man that who looked so worried is asking for help.
I went to him and said that what could I help you
The old man said with anxiety that he lost the way to the hospital that his son works in.
I did what I could to clam him ,and then I told him that we could go there together.
He was so happy that I could help him.
At last,the old man found his son and appreiated me a lot.
But when I arrived at the cinema ,the film had already ended.I think,though I missed the film,I didn't feel disappointed.And I also think,it was worth helping others when they are in trouble.
看看这篇文章有什么错误,或者有什么值得修改的地方,不用太牛X,重赏!
1楼2楼,纯属骗分,一楼的看都没看就贴了一遍,CINEMA打错了,都没看见,2楼更扯淡,把问题复制了一遍居然还说不知道,那你来回答干什么?
不用全文打,只要说哪里要修改,怎么改就好,还可以HI我,马上要用,
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today's有点怪的改成Today,in the afternoon.
第二句that去掉,第三句went up to him and asked what I could do to help him 第四句 said--》 replied
第五句clam改成help.第六句逻辑不对,应改成:he was grateful to me as I helped him a lot.
最后一句was改成is,其他拼写错误就不该咯
第二句that去掉,第三句went up to him and asked what I could do to help him 第四句 said--》 replied
第五句clam改成help.第六句逻辑不对,应改成:he was grateful to me as I helped him a lot.
最后一句was改成is,其他拼写错误就不该咯
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