这篇文章,哪里错了?I try to forget everyone.

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这篇文章,哪里错了?I try to forget everyone.
I try to forget everyone.In fact,I can’t to do this.
I am tried very much.I want to cry.
But I tell me.
Don’t cry because it is over,smile because it happened .No man or woman is worth your tears,and the one who is,won‘t make you cry.The sandflass remembers the time we lost .Laugh,and the world laughs with you; Weep,and you weep lone.

In fact,I can’t to do this.
修改：In fact,I can’t do this.
分析：can't是情态动词的否定形式,后面不能跟to do sth,情态动词后面直接加动词原形.
I am tried very much.
修改：I am very tired./ I am so tired./ I am pretty tired.
分析：这个太Chinglish了,不是外语的常用形式.tried应该是笔误?
But I tell me.
修改：But I tell myself.
分析：我告诉我自己,要用反身代词.
整段修改：Don’t cry,because it is over; smile,because at least it happened.No man or woman is worth your tears,and the one who is,won‘t make you cry.The sandflass witnesses the time we lost .Laugh,and the world laughs with you; Weep,and you weep alone.
整段分析：第一句标点符号有误.两句并列句中只能加分号.后半句逻辑不通,加上at least后句子意思是：微笑吧,因为至少它发生过.第二句很优秀.sandflass不是正规英语单词,故不知其意.remembers建议改成witnesses,意思是“见证”,weep alone,应该也是笔误吧~
建议全文改为一般过去时,更符合语言规范.
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