搜搜做题作业网请帮我改下这封MAIL是否回得地道得体?有无语法错误?
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请帮我改下这封MAIL是否回得地道得体?有无语法错误?
原信：
We do have Hotel Shuttle pick up from Melaka Sentral.The charges is RM15nett per way.If you would like us to proceed the Shuttle pick up,kindly advise us your Contact Number,Bus Terminal Number & Credit card detail such as 16 digits credit card number,expiry date and CVV code.
回信：
Thanks for your reply.I would like to reserve your Hotel Shuttle service
i will take a bus of transnasional from KLIA and arrive at Melaka Sentral on Dec 18th 08:20PM.my phone number is XXX,You need to add China International Code:0086.
however I am afraid I can’t provide the Credit card detail according to terms of confidentiality,but I can pay by cash.I’m sure you will be busy,but I’d very much appreciate it if I could have a confirmation .Thank you very much!
原信：
We do have Hotel Shuttle pick up from Melaka Sentral.The charges is RM15nett per way.If you would like us to proceed the Shuttle pick up,kindly advise us your Contact Number,Bus Terminal Number & Credit card detail such as 16 digits credit card number,expiry date and CVV code.
回信：
Thanks for your reply.I would like to reserve your Hotel Shuttle service
i will take a bus of transnasional from KLIA and arrive at Melaka Sentral on Dec 18th 08:20PM.my phone number is XXX,You need to add China International Code:0086.
however I am afraid I can’t provide the Credit card detail according to terms of confidentiality,but I can pay by cash.I’m sure you will be busy,but I’d very much appreciate it if I could have a confirmation .Thank you very much!
Thanks for your reply.It would be great if you could proceed the Shuttle pick up for me.I will take a bus from KLIA to Melaka Sentral,and I will arrive at 08:20PM on Dec.18th.You may contact me at 0086XXX.As for the charges,I wonder if it is possible that I pay by cash.Your prompt confirmation will be much appreciated.Thank you very much!