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Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.
I have a dream that one day I can study abroad, and I would speak English like a foreigner. So I study abroad, and I would speak English like a foreigner. So I study English very hard. I improve my spoken English by reading a lot of English story and watching English movies. I listen to the English every morning. It help me a lot. I often listen to the English music when I feel bored. It makes my English studying life more interesting. I also join a English club after school. I have many friend that they all like study English.
I have some advice, I hope I can study with foreigner. So school should let foreigner teach us once a week. We should have more exercises.
Thank you for listening.
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小短文修改
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Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be() today and share my experience of learning English with you.
I have a dream that one day I can study abroad, and I would speak English like a foreigner. So I study abroad, and I would speak English like a foreigner. So I study English very hard. I improve my spoken English by reading a lot of English story and watching English movies. I listen to the English every morning. It help me a lot. I often listen to the English music when I feel bored. It makes my English studying life more interesting. I also join a English club after school. I have many friend that they all like study English.
I have some advice, I hope I can study with foreigner. So school should let foreigner teach us once a week. We should have more exercises.
Thank you for listening.
红色句子中间有些是可以避免的错误,或者换成其他表达法。请对比下面的改动。
Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.
I have a dream that one day I can study abroad, and I would speak English like a foreigner. So I am studying English very hard now . I am improving my spoken English by reading a lot of English stories and watching English movies. I listen to English every morning. It helps me a lot. I often listen to English music when I feel bored. It makes my English study more interesting. I also join an English club after school. I have made many friends who all like studying English.
I have some advice, I hope I can study with foreigners. So it would be much better for us to have an English class given by a foreign teacher once a week. We should have more exercises.
Thank you for listening.
如果满分为20,本文建议分数:17-18.
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