搜搜做题作业网请大家帮我看看有错没.
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请大家帮我看看有错没.
我的英语作业 滑板社的宣传
We wanna start a skate board club.Skate boarding is a kind of X-Sports,.It is really exciting and absorbing but also dangerous.So our club can help you to improve your skills in a safer and more interesting way.In our club ,you can share your experience and thoughts with other skaters .We will establish our own website and put some experts’ videos on it.Every member of our club can read the latest WHATSUP magazine for free.The magazine is very popular with Chinese skaters.
有错误或什么不好的地方吗?
最好帮忙想个结尾呵```` ：）
我的英语作业 滑板社的宣传
We wanna start a skate board club.Skate boarding is a kind of X-Sports,.It is really exciting and absorbing but also dangerous.So our club can help you to improve your skills in a safer and more interesting way.In our club ,you can share your experience and thoughts with other skaters .We will establish our own website and put some experts’ videos on it.Every member of our club can read the latest WHATSUP magazine for free.The magazine is very popular with Chinese skaters.
有错误或什么不好的地方吗?
最好帮忙想个结尾呵```` ：）
改了几处,因为没法标颜色,还烦lz自己看下,个人觉得应该写得煽动一点,开头太平淡咯.
The skate board club is recruiting NOW!
Skate boarding is a kind of X-Sports,.It is really exciting and absorbing and might be a little bit dangerous.
But we'll help you to improve your skills in a safer and more interesting way.
In our club ,you can share your experience and ideas with other skaters .We will establish our own website and put some experts’ videos on it as well.
The WHATSUP magazine will be available for all the members soon,and FOR FREE!The magazine is quite famous and popular among Chinese skaters.
DON'T HESITATE ANY MORE,COME AND JOIN US!
The skate board club is recruiting NOW!
Skate boarding is a kind of X-Sports,.It is really exciting and absorbing and might be a little bit dangerous.
But we'll help you to improve your skills in a safer and more interesting way.
In our club ,you can share your experience and ideas with other skaters .We will establish our own website and put some experts’ videos on it as well.
The WHATSUP magazine will be available for all the members soon,and FOR FREE!The magazine is quite famous and popular among Chinese skaters.
DON'T HESITATE ANY MORE,COME AND JOIN US!