在线修改英语作文,请指出错点,或者有哪些词汇用法不对.
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在线修改英语作文,请指出错点,或者有哪些词汇用法不对.
My campus life
When it comes to talking about campus life,I am pleased to give the story about my own feeling and experience these days.
Earlier this term,I had the trouble in adapting to the new surroundings so I have spent much time living in a mental fog.What annoyed me most was that I hadn’t pay for my school tuitions and it seems that no one was going to pay for it .And I was also worried about whether I could still study here.
Luckily,Miss Lu gave her hand to me when I was in trouble.But I’m still in deep despair as I knew other problem can’t not be dealed with if I didn’t pay off my bill.To my great surprise,my aunts ultimately paid for me and encouraged me.I was so gratitude and gradually changed me negative attitude toward life and stopped just grumbling life.
Time passed quickly .And now I am able to handle my life well.My goal to be an excellent student in my class motivates me to be the best I can be.Though now I have found it hard to learn maths well,I still work in it with patience.Besides,I am also suggest to read more booksto equip myself.however ,it is as important as what have mentioned above to build a network of friends.and I will try to live in harmony with my friends.
Bearing my goal in mind ,I will be more brave toward life and more diligent.and now ,I enjoy my life.
My campus life
When it comes to talking about campus life,I am pleased to give the story about my own feeling and experience these days.
Earlier this term,I had the trouble in adapting to the new surroundings so I have spent much time living in a mental fog.What annoyed me most was that I hadn’t pay for my school tuitions and it seems that no one was going to pay for it .And I was also worried about whether I could still study here.
Luckily,Miss Lu gave her hand to me when I was in trouble.But I’m still in deep despair as I knew other problem can’t not be dealed with if I didn’t pay off my bill.To my great surprise,my aunts ultimately paid for me and encouraged me.I was so gratitude and gradually changed me negative attitude toward life and stopped just grumbling life.
Time passed quickly .And now I am able to handle my life well.My goal to be an excellent student in my class motivates me to be the best I can be.Though now I have found it hard to learn maths well,I still work in it with patience.Besides,I am also suggest to read more booksto equip myself.however ,it is as important as what have mentioned above to build a network of friends.and I will try to live in harmony with my friends.
Bearing my goal in mind ,I will be more brave toward life and more diligent.and now ,I enjoy my life.
problem problems,
dealed dealt,
I was so gratitude and gradually changed me negative attitude toward life and stopped just grumbling life.
my,towards
the best that I can be
still work in it with patience on
I am also suggest to read I also suggest reading
总之,你写的还可以
dealed dealt,
I was so gratitude and gradually changed me negative attitude toward life and stopped just grumbling life.
my,towards
the best that I can be
still work in it with patience on
I am also suggest to read I also suggest reading
总之,你写的还可以
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